Succeed

Succeed

a poem by thinkcarebelieve

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My flame screams to me through the silence,

Loving eyes devouring my essence.

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Cascading, echoing, rolling thunder,

Every footstep fills my heart with wonder.

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The candle lit, I coax and tease,

Building pressure, approaching sneeze.

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Always locating the heart I claim,

Clearing fear, love remains.

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We’ve done it now, climbing, spinning,

Dance in the knowing we’re already winning.

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Nature leaps, hold your face to the sun

I am touched by the feeling we’ve finally won.

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One thought on “Succeed

  1. I love the imagery on this one, you really capture the fear involved in searching for God and the peace involved in finding your way. I hope I got that right… I am not sure. That is what I saw here anyway, thank you for this. Hope my interpretation did not butcher it. 😉

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